Downtown Druid (Book 1 Stubbed)

Downtown Druid (Book 1 Stubbed)

by Seersucker

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Graphic Violence
  • Profanity
  • Sensitive Content

Betrayed by his former gang and thrown into the Rendhold Underprison, Dantes has spent the last five years scraping by. A whoreson of orcish, human, and elvish blood, he's lived on the periphery of the periphery, lying, cheating, and stealing to survive. After a run of bad luck, he's made a powerful enemy. Luckily, he's also gotten all the tools he needs to turn things around.

A slow burn progression fantasy focused on rising through the criminal underworld of a city-state using newfound powers and quick wits.

MC's powers will develop slowly, but he will use them in creative ways to get ahead, and in the meantime he's not above just braining someone with a club.

Anti-hero/villainous MC with a code.

1500+ words per chapter

Book 1 is stubbed as of 4/15

Preorder book 1 HERE

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135 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Ch 1: The Maw ago
Ch 2: You'll owe me a favor ago
Ch 3: It doesn't matter how you look ago
Ch 4: Filthy mutt ago
Ch 5: Your kind can be slow ago
Book 2 Ch 1: Mondego, sir ago
Book 2 Ch 2: The weak and the tainted ago
Book 2 Ch 3: This is all that remains ago
Book 2 Ch 4: Plans to initiate. Old friends to kill. ago
Book 2 Ch 5: Why would I want to be anything other than a rat? ago
Book 2 Ch 6: Welcome a brother ago
Book 2 Ch 7: Why did these things all seem to happen in waves? ago
Book 2 Ch 8: Take Care of the Girls ago
Book 2 Ch 9: Grinning Down at Them ago
Book 2 Ch 10: I Think We May Need to Split Up ago
Book 2 Ch 11: Whip 'em out ago
Book 2 Ch 12: He Was a Rat and Had more Practical Concerns ago
Book 2 Ch 13: Such Tasty Crumbs She Gave ago
Book 2 Ch 14: So, We're Even? ago
Book 2 Ch 15: Sincerely, Madame Cornelia of the House of Forteville ago
Book 2 Ch 16: Bureaucrats Are Worse Than Elves ago
Book 2 Ch 17: The Relief of Absolute Oblivion ago
Book 2 Ch 18: I Shall Hope for His Death ago
Book 2 Ch 19: You're Under Arrest ago
Book 2 Ch 20: I'll Need a Coat to Carry You In ago
Book 2 Ch 21: Do You Mind if I Go into Your Greenhouse and Say Hi? ago
Book 2 Ch 22: Let Me Come Up with Something Better ago
Book 2 Ch 23: One of the Most Ignoble Rakes ago
Book 2 Ch 24: Mages...They Just Couldn't Help Themselves ago
Book 2 Ch 25: It's Really All Very Simple ago
Book 2 Ch 26: We Can't Afford Mistakes Now ago
Book 2 Ch 27: Wasn't Worth a Boot Filled with Piss ago
Book 2 Ch 28: No. He'll Just Die ago
Book 2 Ch 29: What Is Your Displeasure? ago
Book 2 Ch 30: Go In Sword Drawn and Start Swinging ago
Book 2 Ch 31: Please, Just Let Me Go ago
Book 2 Ch 32: This Would Certainly Rot Your Teeth ago
Book 2 Ch 33: I Was Aiming For Her Head ago
Book 2 Ch 34: Maybe Dantes Changed More Than I Thought ago
Book 2 Ch 35: How are my seconds? ago
Book 2 Ch 36: He Loved That Hand ago
Book 2 Ch 37: I Want to Talk ago
Book 2 Ch 38: I Owed a Debt ago
Book 2 Ch 39: I Always Appreciate a Good Performance ago
Book 2 Ch 40: Midtowners Are Nothing if not Adaptable ago
Book 2 Ch 41: Your Second Favorite F ago
Book 2 Ch 42: I'm Supposed to Count Things Now? ago
Book 2 Ch 43: Don't Shake Them ago
Book 2 Ch 44: Where was he? Hiding under a half-pint mug? ago
Book 2 Ch 45: Just a Student Trying to Learn ago
Book 2 Ch 46: Try not to die before we can meet again ago
Book 2 Ch 47: What a Lovely Eye You Have ago
Book 2 Ch 48: I've Seen Worse at Family Reunions ago
Book 2 Ch 49: We Recite this Prayer ago
Book 2 Ch 50: I'm the One Standing With the Knife ago
Book 2 Ch 51: Don't be an Idiot ago
Book 2 Ch 52: Eat! Spread! ago
Book 2 Ch 53: Yours, Dantes ago
Book 2 Ch 54: We Were All Young Once ago
Book 2 Ch 55: There's No Reason to be Subtle ago
Book 2 Ch 56: It Was a Nice View ago
Book 2 Ch 57: Steel's Steel and Steal ago
Book 2 Ch 58: Ah, That Old Yarn ago
Book 2 Ch 59: So, What're Your Terms? ago
Book 2 Ch 60: This is an Ugly Look for You ago
Book 2 Ch 61: Are you here to say goodbye? To join me? Or to kill me? ago
Book 2 Ch 62: He Needed Help This Time ago
Book 2 Ch 63: Jacopo is Right There for Gods' Sake ago
Book 2 Ch 64: Carapace, Fur, and Feathers ago
Book 2 Ch 65: I Win ago
Book 2 Ch 66: Spreading to Fill it Like Roots ago
Book 3 Ch 1: A Drink on the House? Maybe a Whore? ago
Book 3 Ch 2: Is Something Amusing? ago
Book 3 Ch 3: Jacopo is Uniquely Motivating ago
Book 3 Ch 4: Two-Legs and Their Problems ago
Book 3 Ch 5: Good Work Today ago
Book 3 Ch 6: Don't Make an Enemy of Me ago
Book 3 Ch 7: Aside From the Obvious? ago
Book 3 Ch 8: I Have Spawned Thousands ago
Book 3 Ch 9: She's a Legend ago
Book 3 Ch 10: Quarter Dead ago
Book 3 Ch 11: Magic, I Assume ago
Book 3 Ch 12: Where the **** am I? ago
Book 3 Ch 13: Blood Covered Muzzle ago
Book 3 Ch 14: Learn or die ago
Book 3 Ch 15: Get out of there ago
Book 3 Ch 16: I'm Better Qualified ago
Book 3 Ch 17: You Don't Need to Flex ago
Book 3 Ch 18: No Such Thing as Doom, No Such Thing as Fate ago
Book 3 Ch 19: You Can Keep the Extra Blankets ago
Book 3 Ch 20: But You'll Own Me ago
Book 3 Ch 21: He Couldn't Show Weakness ago
Book 3 Ch 22: Bad ago
Book 3 Ch 23: I don't have to kill you here ago
Book 3 Ch 24: Jacque should meet his uncle ago
Book 3 Ch 25: Keep a lady on her toes ago
Book 3 Ch 26: You're Shameless ago
Book 3 Ch 27: You're My Favorite Date ago
Book 3 Ch 28: We Are Very Dangerous ago
Book 3 Ch 29: Welcome to the Fall ago
Book 3 Ch 30: I Have Seen Suffering ago
Book 3 Ch 31: He was Rendhold, and Rendhold was Him ago
Book 3 Ch 32: At Least I'll See the Sun ago
Book 3 Ch 33: I AM Your superior ago
Book 3 Ch 34: I've Missed You Dantes ago
Book 3 Ch 35: The Greatest Joke Ever Told ago
Book 3 Ch 36: I'm Just the Muscle ago
Book 3 Ch 37: I Could Win ago
Book 3 Ch 38: We came. I ate. People saw me. May we leave? ago
Book 3 Ch 39: I Heard You Have Food ago
Book 3 Ch 40: Uptown Was Exhausting ago
Book 3 Ch 41: Put Some Hair on Your Chest ago
Book 3 Ch 42: It's in my nature ago
Book 3 Ch 43: Justice Doesn't Matter Now ago
Book 3 Ch 44: Fair Fight ago
Book 3 Ch 45: Patriotism, mostly ago
Book 3 Ch 46: Time to Save the City ago
Book 3 Ch 47: I Wanted People to See Me ago
Book 3 Ch 48: Every fight needs a beautiful woman in the audience ago
Book 3 Ch 49: See You Soon ago
Book 3 Ch 50: Simple As That ago
Book 3 Ch 51: A Damned Shame ago
Book 3 Ch 52: Taste Despair ago
Book 3 Ch 53: You Don't Leave Unless I Let You ago
Book 3 Ch 54: The Best of the Worst ago
Book 3 Ch 55: He Could Make Them Suffer ago
Book 3 Ch 56: I Want Everything ago
Book 3 Ch 57: Whatever you say, Cuz ago
Book 3 Ch 58: Gold Forgives All Mistakes ago
Book 3 Ch 59: I Belong to You ago
Book 3 Ch 60: Today ago
Book 3 Ch 61: I Am This City ago
Book 3 Ch 62: A Binding, A Sacrifice, A Vow ago
Book 3 Ch 63: There's a Whole Mortal Plane out there ago
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Tsuho
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Downtown Druid is surprised me with how fast I liked it. 

This is good from the start and keeps getting better with each chapter. Very interesting to read. Defenetly worth trying. 

Interesting world building that you would like to explore. Magic, races and gods feels fresh. I read a lot here and this was something new to me and I pretty much enjoyed it. It's still feels like a mystery but you very well grasp borders and logic of powers and don't feel like something was hiding from you on purpose. And it is still very interesting to read and explore. 

Humor is good, very much on my taste. Action is solid, clear and believable. Very well paced introduction to character that let you remember them and develop a sertan feeling for them. 

Will recomend this one for anyone who like fantasy. It's easy and pleasant reading that gets even better with time. 

I had my concerns about how fast character gets powerful and then went into higher level from where he was. I was scared that author trying to escalate too fast. But again and again author doesn't dissapoint and just create another interesting arc of the story that I find no less interesting. So I'm looking forward to what's coming next. 

Ahn_zen
Overall

A excellent, mystery led world-building is done throughout the first book, with a relatively clear overall plot goal. The mechanics of the world are interesting, as as the cultures, races and habits of its residents. It's very well done and throughly recommend reading it. 

Book 2 Onwards | 3-Stars 
As a critique I don't feel the aforementioned excellence persists nearly as well from the last ~ten chapters of book one, onwards. The plot opens up, many more elements such as magic come to play in the story, but these elements mostly work for the MC rather the whole robust world using and taking advantage of them, using them defensively, etc. 

I personally also do not feel the MC's reasoning is motivated enough for his actions. If possible it would be better to script this desire for revenge early on in book one, and more reasoning why the revenge need be intricate rather than immediate. Ultimately, as a reader, I feel the overarching plot in book 2 begins to be decided, one chapter at a time, instead each of its chapters serving a planned purpose. 

In Summary:
Book One is extremely impressive with its robust world-building, diverse races, as well as their unique cultures. I would highly recommend it. 


P.S. I don't understand the name "Downtown Druid" and think it somewhat kills the later reveal in book one. Given the setting is "The Pit" or "The Maw" it might make sense to create a name of that setting rather than the MC's power. 

As far as I can see, 'Downtown' has no real relevance other than starting with a D. 

Concordia
Overall

I realize its a bit early for a review.

But so far so good, the story already has interesting worldbuilding only a dozen chapters in.

Other than that im confident in recommending this story. The previous story i read from this author (Deadman) was very enjoyable. Its a stub nowadays but I would also recommend it if you got Amazon.

Im expecting a good story from this author and hope this fiction gets traction quickly.

*Edit* I was not dissapointed, go read it already :D

 

Winzzy
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Starts of a little slow but man is there a payoff!

Reviewed at: Ch 23: Dust, weed, favor, coin if they have it

Color me surprised.  The story starts slowly, set in a dreary and somewhat boring setting, with a main character who is just unique enough to be different but not enough to be inspired.  It was just enough to keep me reading but not enough to subscribe or put it in my favorites list.

That is, until it was.  The action ramps up pretty quickly.

The main character is pretty devious and pretty bright.  He gets out of situations he should never be able to get out of and he is developing his abilities and power (social and otherwise) in a "realistic" way.  The story gets really good though when our MC starts planning crazy responses for crazy situations.  He isn't a hero nor is he really a fighter, but I think that makes the conflict solution more interesting to read about.

The author has done a good job making the cast feel realistic and the environment (while boring, it is an underground prison after all) feel real and lived in.

This one has shot up my list towards the top and I can honestly say I am excited with each new release.  It is very well written and I can't wait to see where the story goes.

I do hope we make it out of the prison eventually as the title alludes to.

gclark
Overall

Slow burn with a good story.

Reviewed at: New Story

I enjoyed the read. Nice world building with good story telling and character building. I felt things did wrap up a bit quickly at the end but is still worth the read. The length of the story was good but it felt like there was a bit too much buildup for the amount of time the ending took.

Overall a good time and a fun read. 

metatr0n
Overall

Atmosphere is very believable. All the characters act in a plot consistent way. Not bloated. Awesome story so far, one of best to be found on RR. Grammar and style are near perfect. Even the smallest interactions between MC and side characters are very consistent to general setting. Just read it and enjoy.

NightWind44
Overall

Progression Fantasy as it should be.

Reviewed at: Ch 41: Gorge yourself

Excellent in all categories. Satisfying progression that doesn't sacrifice character development, believability, or stray into deus ex territory. 

Main character is actually savvy as shit and genuinely makes some good plans. More importantly, other characters are complicated, not always simply established as good or evil in relation to Dantes, and have their own motivations- making interactions with them much more interesting. 

Story is also reasonably lighthearted despite its gritty setting.

5 Stars from me so far. I'm only mad that I found this one too early. Thanks for writing!

 

Sei la
Overall

So far this is the ONLY work that promises a more "realistic" aspect and it really delivers on that. I was already losing hope in finding one like that, all the others I've read start off well, delivering what they promise, but then they lose their way somehow. And that's VERY frustrating.

The promise of a "realistic" work may seem silly, but for those like me who are tired of works where only the MC is good and everything else is useless other than to emphasize that only the MC is good, convenience always appears and things like that, this work will certainly not disappoint you.

Croddwyn
Overall

Great characters, good story

Reviewed at: Ch 52: It's been a while

When Deadman ended, I looked for other stories by the author. And then promptly forgot about them. I recently picked this back up and I'm so glad that I did. Dantes is as complex a characters as in Deadman and the situation as bleak. And yet, it never devolves into grimdark, maintaining a core of decency and hope despite the desperate and dark surroundings. That's a gift (because I kind of hate grimdark).

Dantes is in a rough spot, has been for years, but this story starts his journey to taking more control of his own destiny. I love his approach to problems, killing when needed, but generally trying to find a way around if he can. And it took me longer than I care to admit to tweak to "druid" being an actual thing happening. And I love how that manifest and grew over time.

Anyway, I found this deeply engaging and I hope it can maintain that level of intrigue and interest now that

Dantes has made it out of the pit.

I have every confidence in the author keeping it engaging all the way to a solid end, at least if his work with Deadman is anything to go by (and I suspect that it is).

CausaMortis
Overall

Amazingly well written. Many smart characters both in enemies and friends. Really original setting and just amazing dynamics between the protagonist and the world he thrives in. Have followed this story for the very beginning and been stalking every chapter that came out. This writer remains one of my favourites on RR. Always producing quality.